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AnuragRSCG
Posts: 38 Joined: Wed Jul 26, 2006 10:52 am
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by AnuragRSCG » Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:13 am
Please Comment.
This is a long copy ad. But I guess, this is what makes it different.
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Anurag,
copywriter.
MissMallu
Posts: 184 Joined: Fri May 12, 2006 3:40 pm
Location: Dubai
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by MissMallu » Fri Aug 18, 2006 11:27 am
not bad...however i would use a different kind of layout...perhaps where the copy is emphasised and not use an elegant font...
Allen Mathews
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Location: Chennai
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by Allen Mathews » Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:22 pm
agree with mm. the thought is nice but layout needs to be tweaked.
AnuragRSCG
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by AnuragRSCG » Fri Aug 18, 2006 1:36 pm
Couldn't hav agreed more with MM & AM.
Me, not an art guy. So you can well imagine the plight.
Just happy that you liked the idea and the copy.
Any suggestions on the layout?
Anurag,
copywriter.
Pappu
Posts: 101 Joined: Fri May 12, 2006 1:27 pm
Location: Luckhnow
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by Pappu » Fri Aug 18, 2006 6:32 pm
can't see the logo, should be in white? yes art sucks....