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AnuragRSCG
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Canon

Post by AnuragRSCG »

Please Comment.
This is a long copy ad. But I guess, this is what makes it different.
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MissMallu
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Post by MissMallu »

not bad...however i would use a different kind of layout...perhaps where the copy is emphasised and not use an elegant font...
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Allen Mathews
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Post by Allen Mathews »

agree with mm. the thought is nice but layout needs to be tweaked.
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Post by AnuragRSCG »

Couldn't hav agreed more with MM & AM.
Me, not an art guy. So you can well imagine the plight.
Just happy that you liked the idea and the copy.

Any suggestions on the layout?
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Pappu
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Post by Pappu »

can't see the logo, should be in white? yes art sucks....
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