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sceptic
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ur not allwd 2 c tis if u dont wanna commnt...he he

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ur not allwd 2 c tis if u dont wanna commnt...he he
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Krish
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Post by Krish »

idea is fine but the execution really needs lot of work.
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Anurag
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Post by Anurag »

hey man, where do u work?

agreed with krish, decent idea but the wine cups could be better, the headline needs better fonts. even though i like the copy can't u make a one line copy and more visual based ad?
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Post by sceptic »

thnx guyz. im nt yet thru wit it...still workng on te exectn. just wantd few commntz b4 procdng furthr. Suggnt welcmd...evn on executn
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Post by shantyarow »

Good idea.
But looks like a good wishes card from the 70s.
Much desired on execution.
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Post by DK »

the idea is forced.

try this one. have a brilliant shot of a premium wine bottle in the dark with light reflecting off the top part. instead of the cork use cheese. cheers
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thnx DK. Take a look at " tis is 4 u DK" Topic

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AnuragRSCG
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Post by AnuragRSCG »

What does the visual try to convey?
Wine and cheese? or baby steps to photoshop?

If this is meant to be an ad, pray explain me the whats!
Anurag,
copywriter.
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