Hey people .... check out this ad... do let me know how you like it and let me know if there is something more i should do with it.... and moreover please screw it.....
Thanks
In good spirits
Akash Shandilya
MURDER !!!!!!
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MURDER !!!!!!
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Thanks
Hey people, thanks for your comments. Glad some of you liked it. Any critics? thats what would help... guess you all know what i mean
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kikikikikiki
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yeah! me me me. i'm the critic.
i think it's a great ad for a budding copywriter (are u one?)
but not a great ad at all by any other standards.
the copy does not make me feel bad.
it does not make me feel like becoming a vegetarian.
the intended surprise at the end is not big enough.
the art direction is sort of pointless.
um... sorry.
i think it's a great ad for a budding copywriter (are u one?)
but not a great ad at all by any other standards.
the copy does not make me feel bad.
it does not make me feel like becoming a vegetarian.
the intended surprise at the end is not big enough.
the art direction is sort of pointless.
um... sorry.
Finally
well yeah, i am a budding copywriter....not been around too long... dude... I didn't get the sorry part of it, seriously... thats actually what i was looking for... so now i have to know that i have to make the ad a little more emotional so as to make people feel worse, make the surprise a little bigger, and i know that i can try for visuals even though im not a art person... purely copy based... anyway... the advice and critic comment was great... add some more people...
Thanks
Always in good spirits
Akash
Thanks
Always in good spirits
Akash