anti smoking ad, please critique

poetical · Post by **poetical** » Sun Apr 22, 2007 11:21 pm

is it mediocre?

Sourabh · Post by **Sourabh** » Sun Apr 22, 2007 11:27 pm

if i smoke, my lungs will becokme black and the surgery will cost $73000?
or my friends will get it for free, since it will be valueless?

i am sorry, its been a bit over my head.

poetical · Post by **poetical** » Sun Apr 22, 2007 11:30 pm

20 yrs of cigerattes cost you 73 k, which in the end gets you burnt lungs.

your friend may get the lungs for free because of second hand smoke.

apostrophe · Post by **apostrophe** » Mon Apr 23, 2007 12:07 pm

eeeeeeeeeeeesssssssssssssshhhhhhhhhhhh!