New Anti-Smoking ad

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akash664
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New Anti-Smoking ad

Post by akash664 »

Hey guys could you please comment on this anti-smoking ad
thanks
Akash
(MICA)
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bhavya
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MICan?

Post by bhavya »

hey akash u mican which batch?... im from the 8th batch cccnice to see alumni here

u have a thought there though i would refine it further... u need that xtra push

cheers and do tel me wat u doin
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anirban
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Don't mind

Post by anirban »

Superb copy, but I think copy setting is bad.
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Paromita
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Post by Paromita »

hey akash....write about MICA....we all talk about miami ad school but have no idea about MICA....is it good?
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Post by Sonya »

i like the lines, but somehow it misses something that puts them together....
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Post by drunkenmonkey »

and how do u like it?
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Ok?

Post by shantyarow »

So are the girls referring to that something or the cigarette itself? Jokes aside, it's an ad that would be noticed, but lacks that special something. Push the envelope a little more.
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