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akash664
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by akash664 » Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:32 am
Hey guys could you please comment on this anti-smoking ad
thanks
Akash
(MICA)
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bhavya
Posts: 28 Joined: Mon Sep 18, 2006 1:36 pm
Location: Dubai
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by bhavya » Tue Oct 10, 2006 11:45 am
hey akash u mican which batch?... im from the 8th batch cccnice to see alumni here
u have a thought there though i would refine it further... u need that xtra push
cheers and do tel me wat u doin
anirban
Posts: 11 Joined: Sat Jul 15, 2006 1:07 pm
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by anirban » Wed Oct 11, 2006 12:02 am
Superb copy, but I think copy setting is bad.
Paromita
Posts: 264 Joined: Thu Apr 27, 2006 10:09 am
Location: London
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by Paromita » Sat Oct 14, 2006 11:59 am
hey akash....write about MICA....we all talk about miami ad school but have no idea about MICA....is it good?
Sonya
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by Sonya » Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:09 pm
i like the lines, but somehow it misses something that puts them together....
shantyarow
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by shantyarow » Tue Nov 21, 2006 11:45 pm
So are the girls referring to that something or the cigarette itself? Jokes aside, it's an ad that would be noticed, but lacks that special something. Push the envelope a little more.