My Short Shighted Attempt At Long Hand-Don't Drink and Drive

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Why dont you post your best long copy. I will art direct it for you. First time free :D
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Saumya wrote:Why dont you post your best long copy. I will art direct it for you. First time free :D
Thanks Saumya...wonderful gesture...but I seriously don't believe in Free Lunches...
If and When I need some art help, I'll knock your door (down) :wink:
Thanks Again!
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The copy could have been presented in a more interesting way! Presently, it seems more of a school book boring chapter comprising of questions& answers!! :(

The Layout is no different!!
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I agree with pooja. But more than anything else, i appreciate the effort.
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Ek Kanya wrote:I agree with pooja. But more than anything else, i appreciate the effort.
Thanks a lot Ek Kanya for appreciating my effort and for the question answer thing. I was just trying to create a distinctive style in ad where I drive a point...considering it was a long copy ad and people do like to read question and answer....you might have notice the questions were bit unusual and so were answers....but failed at crafting it very well....
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jainpooja29 wrote:The copy could have been presented in a more interesting way! Presently, it seems more of a school book boring chapter comprising of questions& answers!! :(

The Layout is no different!!

Layout is a fuel tank :)
And for copy, do you have any suggestions?
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What do ou mean by 'layout is a fuel tank'
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