Gymming for Alcoholics

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copywritten
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Re: Gymming for Alcoholics

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Awesome work...i really liked d copy as well as the presentation. I mean its very witty and surely leave an impact on anybody reading it. Kudos to you!
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i also fisrt had some issues with inconstitancy of the text-size and some readbitity issue with that font .........But later i like that after some 10 sec ...it has its own beauty !
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Clever copy! I was wondering if the font could have been experimented with. The copy should cover half the poster area and logo placing is apt. And like everyone else noticed...the font size in the third one; irregularity eh.

Did you execute them or had a designer work for you?

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Yeah, it's really cool; the first one is quite engaging! And I liked the font too, it's new and refreshing.
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:D
if you are going to make more improvements it will be nice to keep the simple nature of the poster and if u want to add more graphics u can add some monocromatic symbols or something ...or go on experiment more on diffrent fonts ..arrgements etc

may be i am not that good but ...keep experimenting more on layouts etc ..
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Re: Gymming for Alcoholics

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I agree on the haphazard typography
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To answer the questions:

Yes, its patli gali. But thats the space that most of us get to work on these days anyway.

And Kiru, I like the abstraction of your design, but thats nice for an art space. For advertising communications, I would rather keep it a little simple. Yes the typography is a little unfinished, but I think overall everyone loves the feel. Thanks for the love :)
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i like them.
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thanks Rajesh :)
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awesome. I love these.
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awesome. Very nice work. Obviously fake.
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encyclomedia wrote:awesome. Very nice work. Obviously fake.
Jealous.

But nice work.
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Re: Gymming for Alcoholics

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Awesome work EkKanya! I loved it all. DONT lose the spirit! :D
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I like! I like! Try adding some minimalistic design in the blank space... Minimal art of gym equipment or something...
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I agree with vasanth
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