Ad for school!

[JCSaiKrishna]

Copy: I challenge that no one can draw this!

[Ek Kanya]

i didnt get whjat you are trying to say. first of all the copy is wrong. it should have been 'what does your child read' or better still 'what does your child study'??

also is the art suggesting Scrabble?

[JCSaiKrishna]

@Ek Kanya: Thank you for amending the copy. Yeah! I think I need to use a real scrabble instead of drawing it.

[keeru]

What actually what u mean by "Drawing" in this?
Anyways its nice IDEA

[JCSaiKrishna]

Thank you Keeru!

I was trying show the smartness of a student logically! Scribbling something and naming it birds nest, raining etc.

Scribbling can never be done in the same way! So saying that "I challenge that...."

[Hasmukh]

not good. these ads have to work really hard. fiorst of all fill a brief. an advertising brief. see your school's positioning. how is your school different. and how are you going to communicate that?

[keeru]

i mean need to work more in it ...it still wont illustrate its done by a student ...basically people wll confuse looking at it

But this is kind of a good start think more like pick a small boy /girl from that school in unform
Get a scribbler arrange it like this ...pose him in front of it like he is doing it take a photograph ...if possible use some Dslr (i mean make it more pro) ...print it out people will get the idea

if boy not boy/girl available u can use hands like BIG hand trying to teach small hand how to make it ...hehhe may be still u need a boy on the other side of the hand ....but school is full of boy/girls pick some one cut his hands off and use it f no one comes forward hehe

Sorry if too offensive hehe

[JCSaiKrishna]

Thanks a lot Hasmukh & Keeru

It's a spam ad done by me, I was merely concentrating on ideation and copy rather than execution.

Your feedbacks realized me how I can execute it much better than the current one.

@Keeru: u r not all offensive

[Allen Mathews]

concentrate on ALL. Especially idea and art are not up there at all.