Ad for school! (1)

[JCSaiKrishna]

Copy: I challenge that no one can draw this!

[Ek Kanya]

i didnt understand this one.

[Anjana Kamat]

neither did i.

[JCSaiKrishna]

Oops! I was just trying to show the attitude of the kid, he has drawn (scribbled) and no one scribble in the same way, and so "I challenge that no one can draw this" I think this ad fails to convey what I wanted to.

[Hasmukh]

but what is it that you wanted to say?

see these ads for the Presidium School. See when you are selling a school you have to sound very very educated. Why else would parents send their children to your school?

http://www.desicreative.com/?p=838

[JCSaiKrishna]

@Hasmukh: I completely agree with your point, especially "being very very educated".

I feel this education environment can be brought while execution and after making changes to the copy!

Finally I got my mistakes Thank Q Hasmukh!

[Allen Mathews]

not good. Dont like it.

[JCSaiKrishna]

Okay, Thanks for ur response Mathew.

[achuthnair]

Hi,

I liked the visual. Let's say the layout is a bit amateurish. Let's take this ad to another level.

The headline can be something like....

Q: How does rain occur?
Ans: Splish Splash Splish Splash Splish Splash

(treat it in some way that it integrates with the visual)

Copy: Let your child learn all perspectives on everything he sees. Education is not just confined to classrooms. It opens the mind of the child to see things in new perspectives.


So now you can create a campaign out of it. wot say...

Achu

[encyclomedia]

excellent insight, achutnair! JC, hope you have taken note!

[JCSaiKrishna]

yeah, it is really a gud suggestion, I dnt knw how I over looked it.

Thanks dudes, for helping me in giving the clarity of thought.

[basant kumar]

you never uploaded a revamped ad

[JCSaiKrishna]

okay

you never uploaded a revamped ad

[basant kumar]

we need a new school ad.

[JCSaiKrishna]

ok then, do it