Nice copy ads for Rotaract Club of Mumbai

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Nice copy ads for Rotaract Club of Mumbai

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Art Directors: Prasad Kulkarni, Mahesh Karande
Copywriters: Lyndon Louis, Pradeep Kumar
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Pretty forced sentence construction and unnecessarily over art-directed. The black adds nothing but wasted real estate. Also, the copy really labours to make the point and uses 'tricks' to get there.
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Re: Nice copy ads for Rotaract Club of Mumbai

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i agree with you on the black bit. not not on the wasted real estate.

I think the ad would have looked better on a white background. the extra 'real estate' is an apt way to draw attention to the ad itself.
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