These are the first drafts of the TVC scripts i wrote recently. I m not sure if this is the right forum.. in case i am wrong.. sorry. It will be great and helpful if you guys could give some honest feedback.. basically about the writing and the short poems
thanks
concept: Strong India
Voice Over:
Har din lakeero se ladta hu
Har din zamaane se joojhta hu main
Har din aakhri saas leti himmat ko
Hausle ka dum deta hu main
Na udne ke liye pankho ki chaahat hai
Na girne ke liye zameen ki zarurat
Raat kitni bhi gehri ho
Har din suraj ki tarah ugta hu main
Tutna gavaara hai,
Jhhuk nahi sakta main
Desh ko chalaana hu,
Ruk nahi sakta main
Bon K2
Ab India banega strong
VO for TVC
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Re: VO for TVC
What's the product? Whats the proposition?
You sound like a lyricist that an ad guy. Its nice as lyrics, but I can't see any product and brand proposition, unless you can explain that to me.
You sound like a lyricist that an ad guy. Its nice as lyrics, but I can't see any product and brand proposition, unless you can explain that to me.
Kikikikikiki bleach-treated my avatar! Isn't she sweet?
Re: VO for TVC
thank you.. I am a copy guy.. and i can write good hindi.. jobless right now
the product was supposed to be a vitamin D supplement... like a calcium sandoz
the product was supposed to be a vitamin D supplement... like a calcium sandoz
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Re: VO for TVC
I'm sorry I'm not the most fluent in hindi but that was nice stuff. Well done.
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