Tear Mate

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 10:51 am

Well... this was unbrieffed, so maybe someone will think that its easy to execute it. Maybe, but to anothers when you have to create anything, it veeeeeeeery hard to choose a product!

the brief said "create any home cleaning product".

--- here we go :S
Client: Tear Mate

Type: Multy cleaning product

Agency: Inexpert Yeminio

Copy: My Brain (parietal zone)

Art Direction: Mouse Compaq Model Nº3+Optical
Genius KB-06XE
My Hand
My Brain

Sonya · Post by **Sonya** » Sat Dec 02, 2006 3:59 pm

very nice art, but i don't get the idea. is it the reflection?

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 12:33 am

Yes.

Well, the extremly cleaning.

who would clean his bed and pillows with a multy-cleaning product?

This is really multy cleaning

Priyanka · Post by **Priyanka** » Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:26 pm

good good.

leadvertiser · Post by **leadvertiser** » Mon Dec 04, 2006 6:14 pm

nice thinking yemino. I like the look of it, but i think yo uneed to make the reflections more apparent to get your ideas across quicker. Right now, you are expecting people to study your ads..and people just don't have the time to do that. You may also need a tagline or something. If i didn't get a brief on your ad, i wouldn't know what you were trying to sell.

Good stuff,
Phuong Le (LEE)

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 3:53 am

Well... about the briefing, yes you are right.

But aboout the other one, I think that its good to give some specs because here in Chile everibody knows what is DuocUC... but in the world they don't.

And about glowing... well, maybe some day I'll try to use that piesce more seriously, more glow and more realistic :p

!EYB

vikram sharma · Post by **vikram sharma** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 11:02 am

good work yeminio, but I agree with leadvertiser. you should add a baseline, a healdine or some explanation for the producct and its benefit. the reflectiosn need to be more precise.

how about taking something you EXPECT to be dirty and making it look clean? that would add some visual surprise?

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:40 pm

At the moment Im afraid about text :p

And the thing that makes me fun about the image is that the room is already the style of the clean ones.

I don't like the effect "dirty, now clean!" that is a bit old (tell me if Im wrong)

I know that this is communication, and if the people don't undesrtand the thing isn't working x).

anyway, I don't like it at all, so its okay

SORRYYY I can't avoid to be at the defensive XD

thanks for the critics x)

!EYB

angelusxxi · Post by **angelusxxi** » Mon May 14, 2007 10:02 pm

Hey yeminio just a question, did you creat all the art?, or just found the pics on the internet? and if you did it, in wich program did you made it?

TNX

Nice art direction by the way

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Tue May 15, 2007 9:57 am

3d max, dude...

you should try it

Europa · Post by **Europa** » Tue May 15, 2007 10:06 am

I have seen other work of yours on 3D max. You seem to be a 3D dude. Do you want to be an animator/3D guy or an advertising art director? Just asking, your 3D skills are really nice.

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Tue May 15, 2007 12:50 pm

Oh, thanks ^^

I'm wishin to be both in the future

we will see what happens

what about you? what you do? or what you want to be?

Ek Kanya · Post by **Ek Kanya** » Wed May 16, 2007 2:35 pm

Do you do Flash? I know some people who are looking for flash programmers as freelancers.

Yeminio · Post by **Yeminio** » Wed May 16, 2007 3:02 pm

Yes yes, I got one

www.jelou.cl

check it out

Ek Kanya · Post by **Ek Kanya** » Thu May 17, 2007 9:00 am

Ok, PM me your rates and working details