JADE restaurant

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moj_kk3000
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JADE restaurant

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Well i did these 2 ads for JADE (CHINESE) restaurant which is in claridges hotel.

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kumarg
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Jade restaurant

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Like the first one a lot...second one does not have the spunk as the first.
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Pappu
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one first rocks...
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Good

Post by shantyarow »

The first one borders on brilliant.
The second one is far away from the border.
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well thanks everybody for the comments
CHEERS!!! :)
Vikas Bhalla
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Post by Vikas Bhalla »

nice way of shoing the ideas...
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Post by Paromita »

you don't need all that body copy. simply the key visual, the logo and one line about the offer.

i have doubts about the headline.
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Post by DesiPimp »

i do not understand the second visual.
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