morning gas identity

[daiquiri]

dudes and dudettes,

how goes? well... I've just co-designed this logo for a breakfast joint a friend is opening soon... critique invited

cheers!
aditya

[JCSaiKrishna]

Logo is fine, but when I read the name, the first thing that went through my mind is farting in the early morning ...

[shantyarow]

Flatulent eggs. Windy toast. Farty coffee. Aah, what a great start to the morning!

[Urdhva D]

The name gives away a little uninviting feeling....!!
The logo can be much better...and colorful and creative so that it can compliment the name and the purpose..!!

Balance is what is important!!

[jainpooja29]

i liked the color combination but the name doesnt convey the desired meaning to me...a bit confusing for the starters!!

[daiquiri]

thanks for the brickbats people... well as for the name, it's a simple wordplay on gas ... fuel/fart...
tongue-in-cheek yes, but with a little sense of humour, not hard to digest ... think ugly mug coffee

[amey katkar]

the logo and the copy doesnt go well with the theme...but the colours used are nice though..!!!

[sumedhsonare]

i like the identity..like the diamond element and the type which is in neon format..very good illustration there.. also the composition is very good..but again the very logotype has to convey the essence..probably some desi-videsi logotype shall make more sense(like how you have Only parathas or sandwizza)..
just suggesting

[daiquiri]

@sumedhsonare: here's to the mavericks, the madcaps, the loony ones ... it's us who ultimately change the game...cheers!

[Jha.sachin]

logo is nice, but the type style is too GROOVY.It looks like if sm party is gonna happen.
try using different logotype,and for name what about 'Morning Burp'

[Saumya]

I liked the graphic design but the concept is weak.

why show gas cylinder for 'gas'? where is the idea? where is the twist in the visual? why not, perhaps, bad idea, but gas burner with knife and fork? or plate, fork, knife, with a matchbox red-crossed crossed out?

[daiquiri]

@sachin: well, when virgin started flying, its logo was considered too groovy for an airline ... so you know...stereotypes are meant to be smashed

@saumya: given the name and logo is very 'western', there had to be some indian symbol which ppl could instantly relate with food ... and what better than the iconic red lpg cylinder ... that apart, im not a big fan of coating an idea on something lest it looks hard-working and laboured. simple can be sticky too. call it the beat school of logomaking

[yakyetiyak]

downright brilliance, daiquiri. the irreverence does it for me. absofreakinlutely funny side up.

[daiquiri]

haha..thanks mate ...you can enjoy more such irreverence on my blog at whiskyvoice.wordpress.com ...
where can I see your work?

[yakyetiyak]

not much to show. param's been kind enough to put up a bunch of my articles here
http://www.desicreative.com/?cat=567