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third anti smoking ad

Posted: Thu Oct 12, 2006 2:22 pm
by Shom.gupta
please tell me how this piece of work is :)

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:50 am
by akash664
Bhai... kaisa hai... ok my review.... since you didnt show this in the lab.... or mabye i ignored... :D


the idea a 9, the copy good as well... but ... so you wonder .... but? what the F*** do you mean but .... aree mere baap ... bolne de ne.... but i think you should add a bit of a story to it .... its sounding like too many in the face facts.... getting me.... sum me maar ne saalo (me and you included) ki..... samjha... try kar ... nahi to ... sahi hai.....

Posted: Sat Oct 14, 2006 11:52 am
by Paromita
i think you need to make the headlines more STOPPERS...the thought is fine though....keep it up.