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A poster i made :D
Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 7:40 pm
by keeru
and wht u say

Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Mon Feb 28, 2011 12:31 pm
by jainpooja29
tehre is too much of copy into it....its looking cluttered....clearing is required!

Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 4:59 pm
by Ek Kanya
true. its very very cluttered. you can easily clean it up!
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Tue Mar 01, 2011 10:40 pm
by keeru
Ya ,its crowded

thanks for comments
Obviously Feb 26 over ...so me not cleaning that now
But next time i will consider that !
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Mon Mar 14, 2011 11:30 pm
by vikram sharma
poster design is a fine art! we should publish some great oster design here at desicreative!
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Tue Mar 15, 2011 1:26 pm
by jainpooja29
yes i agree...indeed i would request everyone to send in their best work(poster/brochure design) to
editor@desicreative.com
thanks!!
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2011 11:55 pm
by keeru
Hei,
@vikram sharma ,@jainpooja29 ...thanks! ...

i will consider sending ....if my works evolve to more better better things

Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 9:59 pm
by Saumya
of course your work will! Push yourself and a lot can be achieved! there is tremendous scope to do some amazing things!
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:02 pm
by Paromita
poster is cluttered! can be very much better!
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Sun Mar 27, 2011 10:19 pm
by vikram sharma
cluttered for sure.
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 12:05 am
by Desh Premi
cluttered.
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 12:31 am
by Saumya
here, I attempted redoing the poster.
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:04 pm
by yogendrarahul
Guys attached a poster design develop for an local cleint.
need feedback from all of you ???
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Fri Apr 15, 2011 6:11 pm
by yogendrarahul
yogendrarahul wrote:Guys attached a poster design develop for an local cleint.
need feedback from all of you ???
Re: A poster i made :D
Posted: Sat Apr 16, 2011 8:36 am
by Saumya
very cluttered. I suggest you redo it yourself and post it Sunday morning.
1) what is the ONE thing that you are trying to communicate with this poster?
2) what is a standard poster size?
3) what is the natural flow of eye in a communication?
try to understand and follow these steps and you should be able to come up with something that is better. Also, your copywriter has written incorrect as well as uninteresting english.
(example : It should be 'Contact' NOT 'Contact On')