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A poster i made :D

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and wht u say :D
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tehre is too much of copy into it....its looking cluttered....clearing is required! :)
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true. its very very cluttered. you can easily clean it up!
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Ya ,its crowded :P
thanks for comments

Obviously Feb 26 over ...so me not cleaning that now
But next time i will consider that !
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poster design is a fine art! we should publish some great oster design here at desicreative!
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yes i agree...indeed i would request everyone to send in their best work(poster/brochure design) to editor@desicreative.com

thanks!!
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Hei,

@vikram sharma ,@jainpooja29 ...thanks! ...
:) i will consider sending ....if my works evolve to more better better things :D
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of course your work will! Push yourself and a lot can be achieved! there is tremendous scope to do some amazing things!
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poster is cluttered! can be very much better!
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cluttered for sure.
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cluttered.
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here, I attempted redoing the poster.
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Guys attached a poster design develop for an local cleint.

need feedback from all of you ???
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yogendrarahul wrote:Guys attached a poster design develop for an local cleint.

need feedback from all of you ???
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very cluttered. I suggest you redo it yourself and post it Sunday morning.

1) what is the ONE thing that you are trying to communicate with this poster?
2) what is a standard poster size?
3) what is the natural flow of eye in a communication?

try to understand and follow these steps and you should be able to come up with something that is better. Also, your copywriter has written incorrect as well as uninteresting english.

(example : It should be 'Contact' NOT 'Contact On')
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