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Welcome to critics...

Posted: Mon Jan 17, 2011 4:48 pm
by JCSaiKrishna
Product: Match box

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Tue Jan 18, 2011 11:18 am
by yogendrarahul
good copy work !!!

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2011 4:40 pm
by jainpooja29
i liked the tagline....very apt!

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 4:11 pm
by JCSaiKrishna
Thank Q Pooja! here are few more ads on HomeLites. And also changed the concept of the ads with the change in visual. Let me know your feedback.

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 4:12 pm
by JCSaiKrishna
yogendrarahul wrote:good copy work !!!

Thank Q Rahul, I have posted few more ads on this, kindly give me your feedback.

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 4:53 pm
by jainpooja29
hey JC...you can try with the visuals but for me still the first one was the best and yes the new taglines are good again!! :)

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 5:10 pm
by JCSaiKrishna
Yeah sure! Thank you Pooja, Probably I'll have to try out more on the layouts and the illustration.

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Thu Feb 03, 2011 11:05 pm
by DesignBoyz
i dint get these you have the rubbing end of a matchbox and you say

"For every good beginning you will need one"

what? good rub?

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 10:37 am
by JCSaiKrishna
DesignBoyz wrote:i dint get these you have the rubbing end of a matchbox and you say

"For every good beginning you will need one"

what? good rub?
That sentence represents lighting the lamp/diya during the inauguration cermony or festival celebrations etc.

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Sat May 14, 2011 11:16 am
by Saumya
you should try aninteresting visual.

the light from the matchstick (the flame) looks like auspicious things like a diya etc..

you can have lots of fun in that space...

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Mon May 16, 2011 11:17 am
by JCSaiKrishna
Saumya wrote:you should try aninteresting visual.

the light from the matchstick (the flame) looks like auspicious things like a diya etc..

you can have lots of fun in that space...
Hmmmm, yeah, I think you are right, let me try.

Re: Welcome to critics...

Posted: Mon May 16, 2011 2:55 pm
by DesignBoyz
yeah, nice idea saumya!