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Hi Everone,

Am looking forward to opinions and criticisms

superb work! excellent! what happens if my story gets published?

The happiness of seeing your words in print!!!!!!!!!

love it! excellent!

not much to criticize. I generally like the work. too much copy, but I guess the client must have wanted it. you could have made the layout more new age, but I guess thats subjective. good work, nevertheless...

thank u star for your pointers....will surely try and improve

nice. I would have treated it like a page from a graphics comic book.

vikram sharma wrote:nice. I would have treated it like a page from a graphics comic book.

i like the idea of doing it as a comic book.

rhea, what kind of response did you get to this? how is the stry progressing? is there anyplace online we can see the story progressing?

Hi Designboy,


The Times of India Group, took the best stories and published them in a seperate supplement called Spellbound. So different people had different ending to the stories.

and i'll confirm wether you can chk it online or no and tell u

wow. that sounds like an interesting thing to do. Do you work for the TOI?

hi rhea! thats a nice campaign. do you work for an agency?

thankzzz a lot anjana....yup i work in an ad agency

I'm not a regular here, but nice work Rhea. Has the copy been written by you?