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my_rhea
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my work

Post by my_rhea »

Hi Everone,

Am looking forward to opinions and criticisms
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Ek Kanya
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Post by Ek Kanya »

superb work! excellent! what happens if my story gets published?
my_rhea
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The happiness of seeing your words in print!!!!!!!!!
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vikas
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love it! excellent!
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star
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Post by star »

not much to criticize. I generally like the work. too much copy, but I guess the client must have wanted it. you could have made the layout more new age, but I guess thats subjective. good work, nevertheless...
my_rhea
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thank u star for your pointers....will surely try and improve
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vikram sharma
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Post by vikram sharma »

nice. I would have treated it like a page from a graphics comic book.
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TruthHurts
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vikram sharma wrote:nice. I would have treated it like a page from a graphics comic book.

i like the idea of doing it as a comic book.
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DesignBoyz
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rhea, what kind of response did you get to this? how is the stry progressing? is there anyplace online we can see the story progressing?
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my_rhea
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Hi Designboy,


The Times of India Group, took the best stories and published them in a seperate supplement called Spellbound. So different people had different ending to the stories.
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and i'll confirm wether you can chk it online or no and tell u
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DesignBoyz
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wow. that sounds like an interesting thing to do. Do you work for the TOI?
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Anjana Kamat
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Post by Anjana Kamat »

hi rhea! thats a nice campaign. do you work for an agency?
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thankzzz a lot anjana....yup i work in an ad agency
Vikramjit
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Post by Vikramjit »

I'm not a regular here, but nice work Rhea. Has the copy been written by you?
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