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please comment and let me know my mistakes. this is one of the sheet of my to be portfolio. The theme is color book for kids. The left side black srtip would give a brief idea about my ad.

i think the idea is neat. you should make the ad look like a REAL obituary. cut out all the facny trimmings around it. makeit look like someone ACTUALLY printed an obituary...

@ Designboyz- Thanks a ton for your comment. I eagerly waited for it. It helped me a lot. I was in a dilemma whether I should go for the actual look or a fancy one. You clarified it. Thanks a zillion. I will work on it, and post it here shortly

As suggested by DesignBoyz, I'm uploading the same ad, which I modified.

jeet! good work and a great improvement over what you have been doing. fantastic.

in your photoshop work try making the newspaper more real.

but apart from all this, I am not sure if as brand like Mortein would like to nbe associated with death, after all lots of people think mosquito sprays are harmful to humans as well. I know such sparys' job is to kill pests, but such an association with death? I dont know.

but anyway nice execution. maybe you should look at another angle. maybe more approachable. see, the mosquitos are AFRAID of Mortein. Now you can build a story around that?

@ designboyz- Thanx a ton dude. I'll definitely work towards it n display the results soon

hi jeet! what do you do? love the effort you are putting in at improving your skills!

@ Priyanka- Thanks dear. I am about to complete my MBA, n is very much eager to join an ad agency as a copy, by end of Feb or 1st week of March, 2010

all the best jeet! keep us posted about where u joined and your subsequent work!

Surely i'll do that

Bidding adieu to Advertising. May be I'm not the right person for this world of Ads.
These are few of my unpublished works which I made for my portfolio.

Here are few more....

its sad that you arequitting. your ideas are there but not quiet. you need some guidance to complete and finish your ideas. dont give up so easily. what are you planning to do otherwise?

@ Paromita- Thanx a ton but i prefer in not takin any more consolation. I've done MBA in Marketing. So, i preferred in taking up Marketing as Career option. I've already joined job

wow jeet. where have you joined?