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Denzel Pereira sends us his work, seeking feedback...

denzel, are you into copy or art? you are working on oyour finish, but also look hard at your ideas. you need to have good sustainable ideas in your work.

Denzel - to be honest its not even a great try. Look at it yourself and think "Does this excite me?" U have gone literal with the brief. U need to apply some idea. Remember, u need to stand out in the clutter. Apply brother, apply.
By the way, the spelling is 'Trafficking' and not 'Trafficing'. Mind it.

And oops... 'REGURALY' is not a word in the dictionary. Check. Recheck.

And, and, and... the word is not 'GOVERMENT' but 'GOVERNMENT OF INDIA'.
U r so very callous. Keep your eyes open, bro.

great going smartsanjoo. wish i could have articulated it so well as you did.

denzel, you need to wok hard on the IDEAS. execution comes later. please take this as positive feedback. i look forward to seeing you postmore of your work.