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Here'r two ads-one for L'oreal's & another for Tabasco Sauce. These are unreleased work. Please comment.

the first one with Martin Luther King is nice, the second one....is it about coloring your hair black?

Yeah, it's a hair colouring product, one that prevents hair showing grey.

And hey ADivasi, our purvaj n' our ultimate bhavishya, thnx for the comment.

adivasi boy, its not Martin Luther king. its nelson mandela. and i did not get either of the ads. kind of difficult to grasp. pray explain please

mandela or king, it is the same thing man, both were south african presidents under white man's rule.

Hasmukh dear,

Sure you understood the hair colour ad. Just a play on the words. People call you Uncle Aunty when your hair greys out.

As for the Tabasco one, Mandela got the Nobel Peace Award. So, the insight's on attempting to make peace-with your taste/tongue once you are Tobasco-ed.

sorry anurag, but very very very bad ads

All right Kiki......
I'll take them to be very^100 bad. Worst ads you've ever seen.

Me a novice. Can you suggest some corrections?
About the Idea.
About the copy.
About the layout.

Always need some pointers from great minds like you.

I agree anuraj, let's see some constructive criticism.

ooops ya sorry i agree and i am sorry about my tone of voice up there

yes, me think like kikiki, the mandela ad is not very clear. uncle, aunty is not bad.

anurag, u from euro rscg?

Hey Kikiki,

No hard feelings. I genuinely trust you guys for all the critisms I receive. I shall always be a learner, and when you hav gurus like you, Dalbir n' the rest, I sure shall learn fast.

Not too bad. Could be better.
I didn't quite get the Mandela ad.
And there's too much punning on the L'Oreal ad.
Lemme think how you can do better and get back.