HDFC-Systematic Investment Plan- Comments please
Posted: Tue Nov 11, 2008 7:24 pm
Art: Naresh Dhondi
Copy: Rajee
Illusrations: Naresh Dhondi
Copy: Rajee
Illusrations: Naresh Dhondi
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HDFC-Systematic Investment Plan- Comments please
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Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 9:00 am
very very nice. are these being released?
Thanks
Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 10:31 am
Still not, its my proactive work
Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 3:55 pm
pro-active! thats cool! thats better than waiting for a decent brief to come in! congratulations! anything else you have been doing?
Sorry
Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 7:58 pm
Sorry, I Have changed the layout
Posted: Thu Nov 20, 2008 10:59 am
wheres the new layout?Sorry, I Have changed the layout
Posted: Fri Nov 21, 2008 10:47 am
Thanks for ur comments
any suggestion to improve this idea to take next level.
any suggestion to improve this idea to take next level.
Re: HDFC-Systematic Investment Plan- Comments please
Posted: Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:48 am
according to your ad idea, the player has a goal and is reaching there. one step at a time.
your ad says roughly 'take one step at a time'
fine. but how does HDFC fit in?
there could be something in the copy or picture that suggests that HDFC helps you get closer to your goal, one step at a time. bad example: the pole vaulter's pole could be hdfc.
hope i was able to articulate my point.
your ad says roughly 'take one step at a time'
fine. but how does HDFC fit in?
there could be something in the copy or picture that suggests that HDFC helps you get closer to your goal, one step at a time. bad example: the pole vaulter's pole could be hdfc.
hope i was able to articulate my point.
Re: HDFC-Systematic Investment Plan- Comments please
Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:29 pm
Nice stuff guys. Intriguing and effective.
Like Encyclo said, I missed the HDFC connection a bit.
Maybe a good old fashioned 6 pt size logo would help
Also, don't think the line's got to be soooo big, this could be smaller and tucked away from the visual, so that one if forced to look, ponder and analyze the visual.
Like Encyclo said, I missed the HDFC connection a bit.
Maybe a good old fashioned 6 pt size logo would help
Also, don't think the line's got to be soooo big, this could be smaller and tucked away from the visual, so that one if forced to look, ponder and analyze the visual.