Child Labour

[penandbrush]

Hi all,

I am an art director and this is my first post. Fresh one, just wrote it a day before.

[Hasmukh]

hey great work. it was great trying to visualise the picture myself, rather thn have a typical black and white shot. much more elaborate.

who says art direction means you have to show visuals? you could also DESCRIBE visuals they way you interpret them! kudos! great one here!

[iraszl]

typography needs work. this page is so boring to look at. text should be inviting.

[dillikatau]

great work dude.
loved it.
me too an art director who loves to write.
hhahahahah
loved it dear.
keep going.
best luck

[guest]

sux.. this sux hard.... get a life dude !

[rutam]

The screwed up english is a deliberate attempt to connect to the image of an illiterate boy or sheer ignorance? Frankly it looks like it's thought up in hindi and translated to english... but then again that's my opinion and it doesn't really matter

[Prasoon]

the idea is nice. Specially when it is a copy driven ad by an art guy. I do agree that you need your writer to tidy up the copy, as I do find it challenging to keep myself engaged.

On the other hand the style is nice, like the grand prix in posters at Cannes for Tate. I have also seen a copy led ad by Ogilvy Delhi that got a Bronze last year and it was for street children begging, it was titled 'RADHA'.

[dustyparticle]

there must be some reason you're working as an art director.

hint: you sure ain't no copywriter

[Pencil_Girl]

give this kid a break. it is a good concept. period.

[dustyparticle]

a break? what's the point of this forum, then? the earlier one is exposed to harsher criticism the sooner one evolves. haven't you read your aesop's fables, girlie?

[Europa]

'girlie'?