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Hey people .... check out this ad... do let me know how you like it and let me know if there is something more i should do with it.... and moreover please screw it.....

Thanks
In good spirits
Akash Shandilya

Looks like an ad script

kinda like it

a very good thought provoking copy-based ad.

a very thaughtful concept i liked it but a small suggestion increase the size of "Become a vegetarian" atleast by 2 points. So that the msg doesnt fade away. But good work

Hey people, thanks for your comments. Glad some of you liked it. Any critics? thats what would help... guess you all know what i mean

yeah! me me me. i'm the critic.
i think it's a great ad for a budding copywriter (are u one?)
but not a great ad at all by any other standards.
the copy does not make me feel bad.
it does not make me feel like becoming a vegetarian.
the intended surprise at the end is not big enough.
the art direction is sort of pointless.
um... sorry.

well yeah, i am a budding copywriter....not been around too long... dude... I didn't get the sorry part of it, seriously... thats actually what i was looking for... so now i have to know that i have to make the ad a little more emotional so as to make people feel worse, make the surprise a little bigger, and i know that i can try for visuals even though im not a art person... purely copy based... anyway... the advice and critic comment was great... add some more people...

Thanks
Always in good spirits
Akash