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my second post
Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:59 pm
by scorpio20
Comments please
Agency: Reibus, Dubai Media City
Art Director: Pramod kumar
Copy: Jovan John
Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:06 pm
by vikram sharma
i think you should remove the line and just keep a neat well designed business card in the logo corner. thats it. the line is just destroying it.
you can extend it by showing various mirrors destryed.
maybe even a Vanity Mirror in a car, with angry lipstick marks all over it.
Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:17 pm
by scorpio20
tank you vikram. card one is a nice Suggestion.
Posted: Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:58 pm
by shantyarow
Hi Pramod,
Yes, the line is just repeating what the visual is saying. The thought is nice though. However, I do feel the art direction could be much better.
Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:50 am
by scorpio20
is it?
Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:13 pm
by kikikikikiki
ha ha did u change the face using photo shop or plastic surgery?
Posted: Mon Jan 22, 2007 1:06 pm
by scorpio20
yup. photo surgery ofcourse.
