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puchu369
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hi all... I am a student. This is the first time I am posting my work on the blog :? . Please feel free to comment. That will be a real good help. :)
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Ek Kanya
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Post by Ek Kanya »

i dont like the HT one. its too convoluted (tongue twister).

the Dream on at 40 has hope. thought i am not sure iof you can use celebrity names so easily.

the viagra is ok.

overall, I think can push yourself harder. also take a loooong hard look at the execution..
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Post by arunchakkravarthy »

ponds is very nice and it has a good thought on it. need a good execution.
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Post by vikram sharma »

keep up the thinking. and get a good partner. if you are copy, get art. or vice versa. finishing a great idea properly can be very crucial.
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Post by vikramdhembare »

Ok Ok Work

I think you need ti improve yourself

"Best Of Luck"
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puchu, please do not be disheartened by all these critics. keep making better and better ads...
mere...paise zara badhayenge...Boss??
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Hasmukh wrote:puchu, please do not be disheartened by all these critics. keep making better and better ads...
yeah... to hack an old Bernbach-ism: he said you had to get all the bad ones out of your arm before the great ideas started coming... unfortunately there are sometimes hundreds...
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Post by Hasmukh »

I think pichu is back on the drawing board. havent heard from him lately...
mere...paise zara badhayenge...Boss??
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