my second post

scorpio20 · Post by **scorpio20** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 3:59 pm

Comments please

Agency: Reibus, Dubai Media City
Art Director: Pramod kumar
Copy: Jovan John

vikram sharma · Post by **vikram sharma** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:06 pm

i think you should remove the line and just keep a neat well designed business card in the logo corner. thats it. the line is just destroying it.

you can extend it by showing various mirrors destryed.

maybe even a Vanity Mirror in a car, with angry lipstick marks all over it.

scorpio20 · Post by **scorpio20** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 4:17 pm

tank you vikram. card one is a nice Suggestion.

shantyarow · Post by **shantyarow** » Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:58 pm

Hi Pramod,

Yes, the line is just repeating what the visual is saying. The thought is nice though. However, I do feel the art direction could be much better.

scorpio20 · Post by **scorpio20** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 10:50 am

is it?

kikikikikiki · Post by **kikikikikiki** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 12:13 pm

ha ha did u change the face using photo shop or plastic surgery?

scorpio20 · Post by **scorpio20** » Mon Jan 22, 2007 1:06 pm

yup. photo surgery ofcourse.