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greg21
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abuse on woman

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(attached the picture so it doesnt crop: admin)
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it says "And we say Marriages are made in heaven" the picture is clicked by me
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Anjana Kamat
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sorry but i don't see the connect between the line and the picture. nice photo though. but the ad is a bit a for apple
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hi thx ill definitely work on it and find out a way to improve it but would like to know abt the "apple" thing i mean i did not get you
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"A for Apple" is a phrase that means "it's obvious". in an ad i would say it means you are showing an obvious visual with a headline. say the headline says "blue car" and u show a blue car it is "A for Apple". whereas if your headline says "blue car" and you show a red car then it is not "A for Apple". it is not obvious. it makes the reader want to read your copy and see why it says blue car when it is showing a red car. the copy would then probably say that this car is blue coz it is lonely. it needs a driver. u know what i mean?
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yes i got it and ill keep this in mind and put my other pictures thx so much do guide me ahead also coz im just on the learning stage thx once again
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basant kumar
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nice stuff greg! i like it!
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Madonna D'souza
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Post by Madonna D'souza »

nice work ...to begin with
but as a student and a lay person ....child abuse is the message that comes accross to me '
but really appreciate the effort ...!!!
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Ek Kanya
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yes greg, where are you from? Student?
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amey katkar
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loookssss shabbyyy....overall an average response from my side
no copy only inspiration..whatever
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the effort is nice greg. Anything else that you may have done?
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