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by akash664
Wed May 30, 2007 4:33 pm
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: MURDER !!!!!!
Replies: 6
Views: 4362

Finally

well yeah, i am a budding copywriter....not been around too long... dude... I didn't get the sorry part of it, seriously... thats actually what i was looking for... so now i have to know that i have to make the ad a little more emotional so as to make people feel worse, make the surprise a little ...
by akash664
Wed May 30, 2007 12:11 pm
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: MURDER !!!!!!
Replies: 6
Views: 4362

Thanks

Hey people, thanks for your comments. Glad some of you liked it. Any critics? thats what would help... guess you all know what i mean
by akash664
Sun May 20, 2007 8:03 am
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: MURDER !!!!!!
Replies: 6
Views: 4362

MURDER !!!!!!

Hey people .... check out this ad... do let me know how you like it and let me know if there is something more i should do with it.... and moreover please screw it.....

Thanks
In good spirits
Akash Shandilya
by akash664
Sun May 20, 2007 7:54 am
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: Do Monsters Exist?
Replies: 12
Views: 9289

Monsters do exist- Reworked!!!

Hello people.... thanks for your comments and critics.... appreciate it.... seriously!

anyway.... reworked the ad a bit... its still verbose... but there is a reason for that.... its for my portfolio.... and i wanted to show that i could write long copy!!!


anyway..... check it out... and screw ...
by akash664
Tue Nov 21, 2006 3:12 am
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: Another campaign
Replies: 10
Views: 7991

Dude.... i really dont get it ... mabye i need glasses or something ... but people next to me seeing this ad... didnt get it either.... so a simple question.... which side of each of the images move... i mean what ???i really dont get the ad... are you comparing it to the actual objects or to other ...
by akash664
Sat Nov 04, 2006 3:04 am
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: an ad for FAREX Baby Food - JLT
Replies: 10
Views: 8352

What the F#$^ :shock: .... are you insane.... alright check this out.. i think the objective of your ad should be to convince mothers that they should buy this baby food for their children... right .... uhhhhhh .... where the hell is that ???? i mean i know what your trying to say .... that children ...
by akash664
Thu Oct 26, 2006 5:21 pm
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: Do Monsters Exist?
Replies: 12
Views: 9289

Do Monsters Exist?

Guys can i please have your comments on this ad i made for CRY.
by akash664
Thu Oct 26, 2006 5:16 pm
Forum: Students Work
Topic: Do Monsters Exist?
Replies: 2
Views: 3973

Do Monsters Exist?

Guys can i please have your comments on this ad i made for CRY
by akash664
Sat Oct 14, 2006 12:50 am
Forum: Students Work
Topic: third anti smoking ad
Replies: 2
Views: 3845

Bhai... kaisa hai... ok my review.... since you didnt show this in the lab.... or mabye i ignored... :D


the idea a 9, the copy good as well... but ... so you wonder .... but? what the F*** do you mean but .... aree mere baap ... bolne de ne.... but i think you should add a bit of a story to it ...
by akash664
Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:20 pm
Forum: Students Work
Topic: New Anti-Smoking ad
Replies: 11
Views: 11361

now thats called helping and inspiration.....

hey arjun ... thanks for the tip man ... the only post i considered .... :D

take care....
by akash664
Wed Oct 11, 2006 2:17 pm
Forum: Students Work
Topic: An ABSOLUT stupid ad
Replies: 5
Views: 7195

lol

absolute BAKWAAS... have you lost it... is that all youve learnt from me my child... :D
by akash664
Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:32 am
Forum: My Work and Portfolio
Topic: New Anti-Smoking ad
Replies: 6
Views: 3996

New Anti-Smoking ad

Hey guys could you please comment on this anti-smoking ad
thanks
Akash
(MICA)
by akash664
Tue Oct 10, 2006 7:24 am
Forum: Students Work
Topic: New Anti-Smoking ad
Replies: 11
Views: 11361

New Anti-Smoking ad

Guys could you plese leave your comments on this anti-smoking ad...
thanks
Akash
(MICA)
by akash664
Sun Oct 08, 2006 3:09 am
Forum: New Advertising Campaigns
Topic: Saatchi Mumbai's work for relpipe
Replies: 3
Views: 3236

nice work