desicreative.com

Great stuff.. keep it up.

Hi,

I liked the visual. Let's say the layout is a bit amateurish. Let's take this ad to another level.

The headline can be something like....

Q: How does rain occur?
Ans: Splish Splash Splish Splash Splish Splash

(treat it in some way that it integrates with the visual)

Copy: Let your child ...

Thanks buddy. The art direction was done by my friends on request. So cannot toy with them, right? The wise old saying goes... beggars are not choosers.

CHEERS!!!
Achu

hi,

Just uploading a very brief portfolio of mine.

CHEERS!!!
Achu

oopppsss.. just found an error. "When did you last disagree" - not 'when did your last disagree"

But the ad is written good. Great to see a good old whole copy ad.

WOW.... a breath of fresh air through the window of Internet Explorer. Great to be here in the hub of creativity.

Me myself - Achu. Not aaaaccccchhhhoooooo!!!... anyway if my name clears someone's nostrils, what's wrong with it anyway.

Me a copywriter - in the era where writing is dead... well I ...